It sounds really good, but SkatingIsGenetic is right--the guitar should be louder as well as the entire song. Some things get a bit repetitive too. Nevertheless, the song sounds good. You should make another like it, but put a lot of effort and take your time with it until it sounds perfect. This song has great potential and you should try to make it reach it. Anyways, good job!
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