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Looks good, but needs work

It's nice to look at, but I think some body parts of the body are not proportional. I saw the picture you based this off of (I assume you did since google has it as one of the first links for master chief), and I think it was just a bit off in certain aspects in comparison of the two. Overall, I like the lighting although it looks a bit inconsistent in parts, and the environment/background looks very good.

Some suggestions

It looks okay, but it could use some work. For example, some body parts are disproportionate- neck is too big, the upper body should be slimmer, the shield should be larger, etc. Some colors simply don't look right especially for the skin. While the background looks fine, it doesn't match the style of the character enough (character is drawn in flash and background not). Shading is technically good in that it matches the source of the lighting which is behind the character, but there should be a greater contrast in colors (the darker colors should be darker and lighter should be even lighter). The outline is too jagged, and there should be a larger color palette overall.

I hope that I'm not being too critical, but this should help improve your work.

gman106 responds:

Thanks for being the first to comment,Thanks for that advice, i do have better works of art but newgrounds wont alow it, you can view these at my homepage:
http://g-man106.deviantart.com/

Looks great

I really like the lighting and the colors, and it looks very detailed yet simple in other ways. Overall, it is a very nice picture. Good job!

fearing responds:

awesome bro :) thats the kinda thing i was going for ..the almost templated look.. silloetted figures etc but i wanted lots of textures and ephasis on lighting and colour too

thanks buddy!

I'm a student who sometimes makes flash games as a hobby.

Chad Duncan @chad-duncan

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Florida State University

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